00:03:46 ! Pikoyan (Quit: See you...) 00:26:35 + seiryuu (seiryuu!seiryuu@180.183.99.42) to #もの書き予備@cre 00:49:27 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106161184210.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 00:52:24 ! akiraani_ (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 00:58:50 ! ash (Quit: 無問題) 01:33:13 Morris -> MorrisZZZ 01:43:07 + imo__ (imo__!imo@218.231.192.58.eo.eaccess.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 01:56:41 ! LizardMen (Quit: 無理だよ。僕に 勝 つのは。やるだけ無駄だってば。) 02:22:37 ! seiryuu (Quit: Leaving...) 05:21:05 + yamano (yamano!yamano@p76edd004.sigant01.ap.so-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 05:21:24 ! yamano (Client Quit) 05:55:51 ! NO_XX (Quit: Leaving...) 06:48:33 + yamano (yamano!yamano@p76edd004.sigant01.ap.so-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 07:50:14 ! imo__ (Quit: Leaving...) 07:58:20 + MELTDOWN (MELTDOWN!meltdown@p220216-ipngn200403sizuokaden.shizuoka.ocn.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 08:05:29 + aspha (aspha!UserID@p126118-ipngn200401otsu.shiga.ocn.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 08:09:03 + Balyoshi (Balyoshi!username@k161241.ppp.asahi-net.or.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 08:09:09 Mode by aba[AWAY0: #もの書き予備@cre +o Balyoshi 08:34:51 ! yamano (Ping timeout: 245 seconds) 08:45:26 + yamano (yamano!yamano@p76edd004.sigant01.ap.so-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 08:55:55 ! yamano (Quit: Leaving...) 09:55:12 MorrisZZZ -> Morris 09:58:11 aba[AWAY0 -> aba[AWAY] 09:58:26 aba[hp]0 -> aba[hp] 10:19:27 + syo (syo!syo@catv078-056.lan-do.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 10:19:40 Mode by aba[AWAY]: #もの書き予備@cre +o syo 10:30:52 Morris -> MorrisAFK 11:23:35 ! aspha (Quit: See you...) 11:35:32 + Prof_M_ (Prof_M_!moriarty@i60-34-55-45.s02.a004.ap.plala.or.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 11:35:48 Mode by aba[AWAY]: #もの書き予備@cre +o Prof_M_ 11:37:16 ! Prof_M (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 12:14:40 ! CHOBOJA (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 12:33:11 ! asahiya_and (Ping timeout: 245 seconds) 12:54:34 ! kairi (Quit: See you...) 13:05:11 + asahiya_and (asahiya_and!yaaic@KD182251124044.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 13:05:40 + aizawayu_ (aizawayu_!aizawayu@106-184-114-102.catv296.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 13:07:31 ! aizawayu (Ping timeout: 258 seconds) 13:22:49 aizawayu_ -> aizawayu 14:08:13 + seiryuu (seiryuu!seiryuu@node-mq7.pool-125-24.dynamic.totbb.net) to #もの書き予備@cre 14:28:17 + akiraani_ (akiraani_!akiraani@KD106161184210.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 14:31:14 ! akiraani (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 14:39:01 ! asahiya_and (Ping timeout: 245 seconds) 14:50:01 + H_Aoi (H_Aoi!H_Aoi@182-166-23-235f1.hyg2.eonet.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 15:24:49 ! MELTDOWN (Quit: Leaving...) 15:38:58 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106161184210.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 15:42:04 ! akiraani_ (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 16:07:53 ! H_Aoi (Quit: Leaving...) 16:52:14 + Prof_M (Prof_M!moriarty@i222-150-220-59.s02.a004.ap.plala.or.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 16:52:21 Mode by aba[AWAY]: #もの書き予備@cre +o Prof_M 16:54:02 ! Prof_M_ (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 17:14:40 + meltdown (meltdown!meltdown@124-110-108-191.shizuoka.fdn.vectant.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 17:24:02 + noraneco (noraneco!noraneco@g101055163179.d156.icnet.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 17:56:33 ! OTE (Read error: Connection reset by peer) 17:57:13 + OTE (OTE!metral@FL1-219-107-27-195.myz.mesh.ad.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 17:57:21 Mode by aba[hp]: #もの書き予備@cre +o OTE 18:29:00 + CHOBOJA (CHOBOJA!choboja@118.176.105.94) to #もの書き予備@cre 18:30:24 + asahiya_and (asahiya_and!yaaic@KD182251130135.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 18:32:15 なろうの『本好きの下剋上』読み始めてみたら、内容は(今のところ)特に革新的とかいうことは全くない異世界転生ものだけど 18:32:52 地の文のリズムがものすごくよくて、読みやすい 18:34:01 ! seiryuu (Ping timeout: 245 seconds) 18:34:05 展開のテンポっていうより、音韻だと思うんですけど 18:35:03 正直、そういう音韻でここまでリーダビリティ違うのか、とかなり驚いてる自分がいるw 18:35:45 + seiryuu (seiryuu!seiryuu@node-mq7.pool-125-24.dynamic.totbb.net) to #もの書き予備@cre 18:36:20 異なると思ふが 18:50:00 + Kannna (Kannna!kannna@softbank126008201111.bbtec.net) to #もの書き予備@cre 18:55:36 ! CHOBOJA (Quit: Leaving...) 18:57:49 + CHOBOJA (CHOBOJA!choboja@118.176.105.94) to #もの書き予備@cre 19:00:22 変わる部分があるとは思ってたんですが、ハッキリ体感で差を断言出来そうなほどとは思ってなくてw 19:00:51 ! seiryuu (Read error: Connection reset by peer) 19:09:10 + Lesaria (Lesaria!Lesaria@h116-0-176-023.catv02.itscom.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 19:10:44 素人っぽくない文章だな 19:13:59 コバルト文庫系の少女小説をひたすら読み込んだかのような文体 19:15:20 完成度はかなり高いですよ、アレ。 19:17:21 + LizardMen (LizardMen!LZD@gc202-137-185-11.gctv.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 19:23:26 句点で説明がずらずら繋がってるのがなろう文体だと思って慣れた後だと 19:23:46 ものすごい衝撃を覚えますね。 19:24:25 そーか、どっかで見た雰囲気だと思ったら『マリア様がみてる』ですね多分 19:32:57 なるほど 19:36:06 ! CHOBOJA (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 19:36:37 + CHOBOJA (CHOBOJA!choboja@118.176.105.94) to #もの書き予備@cre 19:36:50 私が読んだコバルト系がマリみてだけってのもありますが、マリみても一人称視点地の文なので近いかなあと 20:05:43 + ash_ (ash_!ash@61-27-134-148.rev.home.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 20:27:48 + imo (imo!imo@218.231.192.58.eo.eaccess.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 20:30:36 cos_afk -> cos0 20:33:44 ! imo (Quit: Leaving...) 20:40:09 + seiryuu (seiryuu!seiryuu@node-mq7.pool-125-24.dynamic.totbb.net) to #もの書き予備@cre 20:45:43 + imo (imo!imo@218.231.192.58.eo.eaccess.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 20:48:27 + Lesari1 (Lesari1!Lesaria@dcm1-133-204-95-143.tky.mesh.ad.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 20:54:09 + Lesaria_ (Lesaria_!Lesaria@pw126152218016.10.panda-world.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 20:55:35 ! Lesari1 (Quit: Lesari1) 21:00:32 ! imo (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 21:01:40 + imo (imo!imo@218.231.192.58.eo.eaccess.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 21:06:15 + seiryuu_ (seiryuu_!seiryuu@node-mq7.pool-125-24.dynamic.totbb.net) to #もの書き予備@cre 21:09:02 ! seiryuu (Ping timeout: 256 seconds) 21:15:47 ! Prof_M (Read error: Connection reset by peer) 21:15:58 ! Lesaria_ (Quit: Leaving) 21:16:37 + Prof_M (Prof_M!moriarty@i222-150-220-59.s02.a004.ap.plala.or.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 21:16:49 Mode by aba[AWAY]: #もの書き予備@cre +o Prof_M 21:21:45 ash_ -> GMsh 21:25:09 + mikeyama (mikeyama!mikeyama@pd38028f0.nigtnt01.ap.so-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 21:39:41 + kairi (kairi!kairi@i125-204-148-196.s41.a030.ap.plala.or.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 21:59:00 + NO_XX (NO_XX!anyone-in-@p4754018-ipngn26801marunouchi.tokyo.ocn.ne.jp) to #もの書き予備@cre 22:00:22 cos0 -> Kirino_19 22:01:24 書こうと思って書けるものではないけど、なろう文体とはハッキリ違うし「文体で読みやすさが変わる例」として『本好きの下剋上』はすごくよさそう 22:18:54 koi-chan[away] -> koi-chan 22:22:46 ! seiryuu_ (Ping timeout: 245 seconds) 22:25:31 + seiryuu (seiryuu!seiryuu@node-mq7.pool-125-24.dynamic.totbb.net) to #もの書き予備@cre 22:34:11 MorrisAFK -> Morris 22:39:26 ! 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