00:09:09 + NM (NM!NM@ntkngw683086.kngw.nt.ngn.ppp.infoweb.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 00:27:24 ! yamano (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 00:39:55 ! syamo (Remote host closed the connection) 00:53:04 ! ash_ (Quit: 無問題) 00:59:38 ! TK-Leana (Read error: Connection reset by peer) 00:59:58 + TK-Leana (TK-Leana!tk-leana@112-69-241-75f1.hyg1.eonet.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 01:00:02 Mode by koi-chan: #もの書き@cre +o TK-Leana 01:14:17 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 01:16:32 + CHOBOJA (CHOBOJA!choboja@121.160.211.233) to #もの書き@cre 01:16:51 ! akiraani_ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 01:18:45 ! CHOBOJ___ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 01:19:43 + CHOBOJA_ (CHOBOJA_!choboja@121.160.211.233) to #もの書き@cre 01:23:18 ! CHOBOJA (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 01:23:39 + CHOBOJA (CHOBOJA!choboja@212.102.51.210) to #もの書き@cre 01:26:06 ! CHOBOJA_ (Ping timeout: 240 seconds) 01:26:53 + kira (kira!kira@M014008033161.v4.enabler.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 01:53:33 ! KITE (Quit: 陽気な奴でも聴こうよ。) 03:21:09 ! CHOBOJA (Quit: Leaving...) 03:47:12 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 03:52:48 ! V-zEn_Mac (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 03:52:56 ! syo (Quit: Leaving...) 04:12:13 ! kira (Quit: Leaving..) 06:21:03 ! ponzz (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 06:36:07 + KITE (KITE!KITE@d27-110-105-124.cna.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 06:36:30 Mode by koi-chanSRV: #もの書き@cre +o KITE 07:22:59 + yamano (yamano!yamano@101-140-228-191f1.shg1.eonet.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 07:30:23 + kira (kira!kira@M014008033161.v4.enabler.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 07:49:10 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 07:54:36 ! V-zEn_Mac (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 08:03:45 ! yamano (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 08:31:42 ! Marcy_ (Ping timeout: 240 seconds) 08:32:44 + Marcy (Marcy!marcy@om126161097095.8.openmobile.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 08:41:11 ! kira (Quit: Leaving..) 08:44:14 + syamo (syamo!syamo03@240f:a1:b6f2:1:da08:276f:a9c7:f316) to #もの書き@cre 09:12:54 + akiraani_ (akiraani_!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 09:12:55 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 09:17:13 ! akiraani (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 09:24:49 ! arca (Quit: Leaving...) 09:26:45 + arca (arca!arca@KD106167205203.ppp-bb.dion.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 09:27:02 Mode by koi-chanSRV: #もの書き@cre +o arca 09:36:53 + syo (syo!syo@165.136.91.144.lan-do.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 09:54:55 ! Marcy (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 09:55:47 + Marcy (Marcy!marcy@om126133215110.21.openmobile.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 10:59:08 + V-zEn_Ma_ (V-zEn_Ma_!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 10:59:08 ! V-zEn_Mac (Read error: Connection reset by peer) 11:33:02 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 11:35:40 ! akiraani_ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 11:56:15 + Marcy_ (Marcy_!marcy@om126255041157.24.openmobile.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 11:56:24 ! Marcy (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 12:12:18 + akiraani_ (akiraani_!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 12:15:57 ! akiraani (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 12:30:53 ! kairi (Quit: See you...) 12:31:58 + kairi (kairi!UserID@2405:6587:b220:3a00:533:8831:762d:98bb) to #もの書き@cre 12:53:13 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 12:56:29 + akiraan__ (akiraan__!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 12:56:55 ! akiraani_ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 13:00:09 ! akiraani (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 13:34:05 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 13:36:17 + akiraani_ (akiraani_!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 13:37:12 ! akiraan__ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 13:39:48 ! akiraani (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 14:15:04 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 14:19:27 ! akiraani_ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 14:31:59 ! syamo (Remote host closed the connection) 14:51:54 + akiraani_ (akiraani_!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 14:55:52 ! akiraani (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 14:56:04 + akiraani (akiraani!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 14:59:06 ! akiraani_ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 15:09:30 + ao_MacB (ao_MacB!ao_macb@fs76eefb0e.tkyc628.ap.nuro.jp) to #もの書き@cre 15:17:44 + akiraani_ (akiraani_!akiraani@KD106180006224.au-net.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 15:19:54 ! Marcy_ (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 15:21:12 ! akiraani (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 15:22:08 + Marcy (Marcy!marcy@om126255012119.24.openmobile.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 16:00:32 + Kannna (Kannna!Kannna@softbank126002251152.bbtec.net) to #もの書き@cre 16:00:40 ＃こにゃんちはぁ 17:10:27 ! Balyoshi (Quit: Leaving..) 17:39:13 + Balyoshi (Balyoshi!username@k161241.ppp.asahi-net.or.jp) to #もの書き@cre 17:39:25 Mode by aba[AWAY]: #もの書き@cre +o Balyoshi 18:15:28 ! V-zEn_Ma_ (Remote host closed the connection) 18:18:46 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 18:23:48 ! V-zEn_Mac (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 18:52:44 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 19:01:31 + ponzz (ponzz!ponzz@pl39934.ag2525.nttpc.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 19:04:06 ! V-zEn_Mac (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 19:07:29 + meltdown (meltdown!meltdown@p5711006-ipoe.ipoe.ocn.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 19:10:58 当たり前のことなんだけど、冒頭の文章が駄目な小説はどこをとっても駄目な文章だし、冒頭の文章がいい小説は中身もいい文章ということを 19:11:07 身をもって知った一日でした 19:13:04 というのも、現在同人誌の三巻目の校正作業を行ってるのですが 19:13:23 もう、冒頭からして最悪でどうしようもない文章でうんざりして 19:13:51 それをある程度見れる形に整えてはーよかったと思って本文を読み進めてみたら 19:14:05 これが最悪にひどくてあうあうあー 19:14:22 あらら 19:14:43 ponzzさんの自作原稿かにゃ？＜同人誌 19:14:49 そそ 19:15:03 ストライクウィッチーズの二次創作ですけどね 19:15:22 もう、ひどくてひどくてどうしようもないんだけど 19:15:28 よく話題に出てるラインですね＜二次創作 19:15:40 ですな 19:16:07 でも、これをきっちり読める形に叩いて直せたら、自分の文章力もまた一つランクが上がるかもと思って 19:16:16 ちくちくちくちくなおしてます 19:16:55 + yamano (yamano!yamano@101-140-228-191f1.shg1.eonet.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 19:17:01 ガンバノ 19:17:06 がんばる 19:17:32 本当なら、年末に同人誌にしようと思ってたんだけど、諦めました 19:17:48 ふむ 19:18:18 ほんとひどいんだもん 19:18:19 そか、もう10月も下旬だし 19:19:00 イラスト発注の時間考えても無理ー 20:01:52 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 20:44:51 + kira (kira!kira@M014008033161.v4.enabler.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 20:50:45 ! meltdown (Quit: 皆様に「砂漠の風」のあらんことを) 20:54:09 + meltdown (meltdown!meltdown@p5711006-ipoe.ipoe.ocn.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 20:56:21 + ash (ash!ash@60-62-21-53.rev.home.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 21:43:32 ! V-zEn_Mac (Remote host closed the connection) 21:46:36 ! ponzz (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 22:03:57 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 22:08:57 ! ao_MacB (Quit: Leaving...) 22:09:21 ! V-zEn_Mac (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 22:12:33 ! meltdown (Quit: 皆様に「砂漠の風」のあらんことを) 22:21:03 ! Kannna (Quit: Leaving...) 22:27:50 ! Marcy (Read error: Connection reset by peer) 22:28:17 + Marcy (Marcy!marcy@om126255012119.24.openmobile.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 22:35:58 + syamo (syamo!syamo03@240f:a1:b6f2:1:da08:276f:a9c7:f316) to #もの書き@cre 22:38:50 + V-zEn_Mac (V-zEn_Mac!v_zen@243.131.178.217.shared.user.transix.jp) to #もの書き@cre 22:48:24 ! yamano (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 22:58:45 ! V-zEn_Mac (Ping timeout: 276 seconds) 23:20:44 + ponzz (ponzz!ponzz@pl39934.ag2525.nttpc.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre 23:51:06 + yamano (yamano!yamano@101-140-228-191f1.shg1.eonet.ne.jp) to #もの書き@cre